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The sea
Contributed by
stripes
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Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 04:14:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The cool sea breeze is rushing against her skin,
the tide rolls in, the tide rolls out,
there are people all around her,
a couple to one side holding hands,
on her other a group of elderly sitting on the bench.
People are fishing, swimming, playing cricket,
she hears children laughing, jet skies buzzing away.
As the sun sets she thinks,
a perfect end to a day, a month,a year, a life.
As the tide rolls out for the last time in her life,
her last thoughts are of her children,
her soul consumed by the sea.
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stripes
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2006-08-30 04:14:44]
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Re: The sea
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by StormyNites on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 04:18:06 AM AEST
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| What a very sad poem...but very good read |
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Re: The sea
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:40:54 AM AEST
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Wow..unexpected ending. Beautiful images of the sea and the then the sorrow comes. Great write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: The sea
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by stripes on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:42:06 AM AEST
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| thanx |
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