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You Let It Die.<3
Contributed by
xDiSaStErPiEcEx
on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 04:13:04 PM in AEST
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sitting here
a thought of you
push it away
what can i do
a tear streaked face
i black cold heart
im sick of the past
i want to restart
people all around me
still feeling so alone
such a crowed place
i want to just go home
you're not here
but i see you everywhere
i knew i loved you
i thought you might care
i feel like im choking
my eyes sick of crying
this pain in my heart
makes me feel like im dying
but i cant go back
cant fix this heart
this isnt a game
theres no restart
i love you still
more than you know
you hate me now
call me a hoe
i cant stand to see you
causing me pain
hurting inside
more than words could explain
im not turning back
so this is goodbye
all that we had
you just let it die
The End.
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Re: You Let It Die.<3
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 04:41:49 PM AEST
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Very sad, I know how you feel though.
-Channing- |
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Re: You Let It Die.<3
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by Oneir8dude on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 10:20:53 PM AEST
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Love hurts then we die....
I like how you wrote it so all can relate...
Thank You for sharing
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Re: You Let It Die.<3
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by Skillz on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 11:44:05 PM AEST
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| I feel your pain and anger..and trust me ..so many out there feeling that way..these are the hurts that make us compassionate later in life. |
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Re: You Let It Die.<3
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by stripes on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 01:47:41 AM AEST
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| that was a very emotional poem and you are a very good poet. it was excellent. |
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