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Warm October Day
Contributed by
Rosa
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Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 11:54:48 AM in AEST
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oops
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Sunshine as gold
as Cellini's saltcellar.
I sit on the smooth pine floor,
every snarl of wood
sanded down to a softness.
The world is so vast.
You could place a million violins side by side,
the voice of each could shout,
up from the stomachs
of the womanly curved bodies,
pulse through the strings,
and never touch the equator.
Copyright ©
Rosa
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2006-08-29 11:54:48]
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Re: Warm October Day
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 05:05:30 PM AEST
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I know I shouldnt wish my life away, but I'm almost looking forward to it being October again lol.
Such tranquility in this..........nice
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Re: Warm October Day
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by TwistedCage on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:22:49 AM AEST
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This had a very calming effect on me for some reason, which is something I'm not entirely accustomed to. So, for that, you desrve a round of applause for a piece very well written.
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