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My Surrender
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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A time to cry, put aside
Locked up in my eternity’s void
I will cry another day
When I can handle this madness better
Under insane words I hide
Knives in my soul, love in my rhythm
My sanity mocks my existence
I fall apart as my divinity claims all
I smell the lotuses
And witness beauty seduce everything…
Everything melts, every cell lights up
The power of beauty, the seducer, the spiritual…
Turn around Time, its your hour to go
No more linear hours to pile up morality
Your rules will fall apart, stumble and disappear
Disintegrate to shake these centuries off
Rituals – Dance when you get there
Its your call, your last move at camouflage…
Everything dissolves as the spiral speeds up
Lives and hopes, wishes and visions…
Ah! My breath, wont you rush too?
Don’t rasp their rhythm, play traitor to life
Am I the witness, or, the victim?
On the spiral’s edge, surrendering… moving on…
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2006-08-28 22:55:04]
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Re: My Surrender
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 01:00:32 AM AEST
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fantastic, beautifully written, and the last two lines of the first stanza reminded me of what scarlett, from gone with the wind, used to say all the time, "i will think about this tomorrow, when i can handle it". anyway, great work.
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Re: My Surrender
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 01:11:29 AM AEST
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This intrigued me. I found much to ponder and many different perpectives to explore. I love it when that happens. Very well written exploration of life and time. I'll be back to this I reckon.
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