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The Guardian
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Nazmythian
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Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:53:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Re: The Guardian
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 11:04:40 PM AEST
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What a fantastic write-simple. And a beautiful image, too. I 'll probably read this again, when I have a chance to think about it in a little more depth, It deserves no less.
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Re: The Guardian
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 11:27:41 PM AEST
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Awesome write Nazzy as always.
huggs,
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Re: The Guardian
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 11:37:08 PM AEST
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Very Well Done... nice write...
Thanks for sharing this |
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Re: The Guardian
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 12:05:00 AM AEST
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Your words don't need these pictures, for your words ARE pictures, but they really compliment the presentation. SUPERB, Naz.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: The Guardian
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 12:05:35 AM AEST
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This is the most gentle, tender thing I've read in quite some time..I've been missing writes like this. Thank You.
mary...OH, p.s. 10,000 stars.... |
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Re: The Guardian
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 02:41:00 AM AEST
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| This is so hauntingly beautiful, brought tears to my eyes. A truly wonderful write. Thanks for sharing it. Sue x |
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Re: The Guardian
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 08:46:52 PM AEST
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Oh my word .. snazzy you outdone yourself, my sweet friend!
This had me consumed in tears. I think it's one of the finest
writes I've seen from you. It's so completely beautiful and
unafraid, you know? God, it's just STUNNING! The words
meld so perfectly with the picture. And those words .. oh
gosh, I just can't say enough dear poet.
Truly a work of art.
~Breezy |
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Re: The Guardian
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:30:31 AM AEST
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This moved me to tears... it hit very close to home...
(remember me and lifefliesby?.......yeah.....)
Thanks Nazzy.
Love and peace,
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Re: The Guardian
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes. So a profound and moving write. Each word reached out to me. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: The Guardian
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:47:25 AM AEST
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Wow, now that's a powerful image there, and the verse is definitely on par. You've reached a rarely-plumbed emotional depth here, which is the making of some (all?) of the finest poems there are.
Great rhythm and rhyme, as well.
Bravo!
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Re: The Guardian
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 11:56:22 AM AEST
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Naz,
An awesome poem of love, but also of wisdom. The insight that must occur that only when the pain is shared does comforting come through. And only when the trust is gained does one risk sharing th e pain
Great graphics and you always remind me to be versatile.
Great write, my friend
Will/Terry |
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Re: The Guardian
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 11:53:04 PM AEST
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| An excellent piece...very well executed |
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