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Never to rest
Contributed by
silent
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:05:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Running through darkness
Trees whisper soft comfort
Pale moon bloody and bright
Panic stricken, sprinting
Over breaking branches, stones
Need to keep going, cannot stop
Shrouded in shadows, forever running
Towards that glimmer of hope
Crying for the light
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silent
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2006-08-28 22:05:23]
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Re: Never to rest
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 01:07:33 AM AEST
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awesome. some..sort of suspense, rush, in the poem....great one.
--natalya
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Re: Never to rest
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 09:15:15 PM AEST
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The struggle in this is evident and very well conveyed.
The whole piece is filled with incredible imagery .
very dark and foreboding ..
Great post!
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Re: Never to rest
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by Skillz on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 09:14:08 PM AEST
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| very nice poem. |
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