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Please Love me The Right way
Contributed by
SunRaise
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 07:38:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dont love me for awhile
love me forever
Love me until the Nile...ends
Love me with your heart
not just your body
love me like you would love an expensive piece of art
love my eyes love my thighs
Love the way i rise when i awake
If you cant love me the right way then maybe you and me together is mistake
I wanna be able to wear not so fancy clothes around you
And You still wanna take me to meet your crew
But if you cant love me the right way
maybe you shouldnt stay
so Please just go away
Copyright ©
SunRaise
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2006-08-28 19:38:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Please Love me The Right way
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 12:35:24 PM AEST (User
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Wow SunRaise, Your words of poetry reach right out and gently touch me in a special kind of way as you are right on target with this one. Love should stem from the inside out with pride. I really appreciate your writing style and find myself becoming your reading fan. I want you to know that each time you reach for your poetic pen, you now have a fan bearing a glowing warm grin. Wonderful poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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