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untitled
Contributed by
amaya_h_k
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Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:51:10 PM in AEST
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Thin white scars on a broken doll,
just like the fraying edges of a desolute bear.
Did we miss the imperfection?
Was it unnoticed until it
dissolved
beneath our touch?
No the fraying,
the cracking and cutting was there all along,
getting worse as we grew.
The older imperfections cannot be fixed,
The newer shall heal...
Ignore the future and we are all doomed.
Copyright ©
amaya_h_k
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2006-08-28 12:51:10]
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Re: untitled
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by twbanter on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 03:03:54 PM AEST
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Amaya!!!
My Heart goes out to you! Please don't cut anymore, please
It hurts me to know you do that. I care, if you think no one does. And so do the many people here.
Cutting, is for attention, or because of depression, either way it's not productive! You have just proved that you are poetically worthy, is that not enough? You are worth so much... Believe it! It's true...
Tom W
PS personally e-mail me, anytime you feel the need... Please! |
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Re: untitled
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by twbanter on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 03:05:13 PM AEST
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Incidently... Nice, well written poem
Tom W
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