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and so I sail
Contributed by
twbanter
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Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:01:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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And so I sail
The waters so free
The wind has no care
Oh the depths of the sea!
This life's so troubled
These tasks these trials these needs
Things I don't want
The many ways we bleed
The hurtful acts
Man against man
All these are gone
When I sail
You say it's my responsibility
I just jibe and rail
Against this truth
It's not on me
I didn't make this mess
Neither the Sea
We are guiltless in this
And the wind is calling
The birds take wing
And so must I
So I'm lost
In my love of sailing
Like a current I flow
Oblivious, my sails full
Lifes cares in my wake
My horizion a glow
With hope and peace
And so I sail
And let go....
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Re: and so I sail
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:39:40 AM AEST
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Wow man, this was nice. I was caught up in the sailing....so much I was sure I heard seagulls and felt a spray of water.
I'm sailing along too. Thanks for the ride.
Great write.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: and so I sail
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:10:58 PM AEST
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| Makes me want to set sail, brilliant to sail away from all your cares..xxx |
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Re: and so I sail
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:52:24 PM AEST
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An impressive way to let all the struggle and
stress of daily life go.
The ending was serene .. enjoyable read Tom.
~Breezy |
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