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What are we waiting for?
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 03:10:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My palm is upturned,
Beckoning
Your palm is outstretched,
Reaching
Our hands are seasons apart,
Waiting
My eyes are clouded,
Leaking
Your eyes are nervous,
Twitching
Our glances will not meet,
Waiting
My heart is lonely,
Pining
Your heart is uncertain,
Abstaining
Our souls are ready,
Waiting
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2006-08-28 03:10:08]
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Re: What are we waiting for?
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by twbanter on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:06:25 AM AEST
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Okay, I liked it. Pretty good stuff.
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Re: What are we waiting for?
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by spanky on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 09:21:10 AM AEST
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| what a great and well-crafted poem. We're all waiting, I guess. Half the time we don't even know what we're waiting for...we just are. |
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