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Love Like Water
Contributed by
Channing
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:42:28 AM in AEST
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Flowing through everything
A part of life
That seeps into every crevice
And finds its way into everyone
It cleanses the soul
Giving strength to us all
For it’s what brings life
And energy into emptiness
It can rush in too quickly
And cause pain
Or gently flow in
Causing calm happiness
If treated well
It can soothe one forever
If not taken care of
It can rust and erode
One into nothing
Leaving them forever useless
But no matter what
You need it to live
Otherwise you’ll dehydrate
And wither into nothingness
So embrace it
And let the water flow
Through you
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2006-08-28 00:42:28]
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Re: Love Like Water
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:58:27 PM AEST
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we need both, 'tis true ..each as important as the other, or we would surely die~
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Re: Love Like Water
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 05:17:15 PM AEST
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I liked the style.........and just like water, it flowed.
Enjoyable read, I guess a few people missed this one but their loss I think
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