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Im ready for the occasoin

Contributed by Metikulus on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 08:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SpecialOccassion

My mind is the bannana clip loaded with rhymes
My pen is the gun equiped and reloaded to explode at all times
My flow through the speakers is like flesh eating bullets engulfing the weakest
My technique on the mic is so unique and tight
It got you syked like the boxing moves you see front row at a fight
When a dude get his jaw dropped, blood squirting out his mouth, what a sight!
Listen Dude! I roll pinners like you, yea they get smoked quick
You got beef with me then come test the clique
Nah I aint sayin Im a ******
What Im sayin is this
They ride for me as Id ride for them
But when I ride alone
Thats my own, greesy business I gotta attend to
When are you comming through?
Thats the only question Im askin, I got something special for you!

Copyright © Metikulus ... [ 2006-08-27 20:49:41]
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Re: Im ready for the occasoin (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 09:51:17 PM AEST
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I liked this piece. Had a little attitude to it. Some really great lines like this one...

"My pen is the gun equipped and reloaded to explode at all times"

Sweet.

Peace, Laura

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