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Letting Go
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 04:20:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I lie awake in bed,
thoughts swirling in my head.
Rain taps at my window, beckoning me.
The wind whispers in my ear,
all I can can hear- "Let go"
A flowers scent tickles my nose.
I'm in a fool's paradise.
I sit here and contemplate my fire of a desire.
Is it all worth it?
Can I let go?
I leap off my cloud with graceful steps.
I've finally let go . . .
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2006-08-27 16:20:42]
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Re: Letting Go
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by Shmokin on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 05:01:56 PM AEST
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| letting go, the scariest thing a person can do , nice write :-) |
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Re: Letting Go
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by topcatcrowther on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 10:41:02 AM AEST
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| brill, I liked the idea. |
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