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Sets Me Free
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 02:44:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Never good enough for you
There was nothing I could do
You took my heart away
Not giving me a single day.
I'll give myself one more scar
To show that ardency goes far
And forever to remind
My escape is hard to find.
Take my hand
And you'll understand
I'm the one to blame
And this is not a game.
Maybe it's pathetic
It'll sink in if you let it
And then you'll see
It sets me free.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2006-08-27 14:44:16]
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Re: Sets Me Free
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by artjunkiekyle on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 04:25:39 PM AEST
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| THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT. |
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Re: Sets Me Free
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 08:05:23 PM AEST
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I am very taken with your write-
it is well presented and flows nicely.
Very well done!
Laurie |
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Re: Sets Me Free
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by trini on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:44:20 AM AEST
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This was written really nicely
and i liked the emotion here
really strong
but cutting never set me free, it always seemed to trap me
lock me up so i wouldn't have to deal with real problems. but that was me
and maybe the poem wasn't even about that
but it was my interpretation
you got me to comment so therefore it was good
keep it up
-Trini |
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