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RAIN
Contributed by
twbanter
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Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 08:16:26 AM in AEST
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The rain it patters outside
Unrythmically in rhythms
My mind it flows symmetrically
To the tune of the rain
My life an adventure
Like each drop
From whence does it come?
To where will it drop?
Does each drop even care, or do I?
Yes, I don’t choose to rain at random
Like the rain does, falling heedless
But like me, falling none the less
Oohhh that it could be so simple
Just a drop upon a crest
I wish my drop to have a purpose
Isn’t that the soul of me?
Or just a passing storm of my own ego
Just a squall most would let go
And watch the sunset aglow
In the aftermath of the storm
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Re: RAIN
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 08:53:38 AM AEST
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| I like you thoughts and where they went. Good work |
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Re: RAIN
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 09:24:46 AM AEST
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| Brilliant, think our emotions are like the seasons the way they change aswell, same with the rain.. Great poem.. xxx |
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Re: RAIN
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 05:37:17 PM AEST
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Fine write. I am enjoying your writes. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: RAIN
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by brneyes7513 on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 06:13:49 PM AEST
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Funny.....I'm new to the site and just posted a poem I wrote yesterday...because it was raining!
Great comparison: raindrops = to out lives
Really enjoyed it! |
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Re: RAIN
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by Alison on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:44:36 AM AEST
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| wow I have thought that too! Its incredible that you put it the way to did. A great and moving write. |
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Re: RAIN
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 06:41:09 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem. The imagery and word choice is outstanding. You give this beautiful aspect of nature justice with words. Well done! |
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