|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Grief
Contributed by
THERESEWANECK
on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 07:00:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
|
Everything is larger
Lapsing is the tedious time ticking
Within a heart healing
A soul sorrowfully inflated
Claiming clothes and an empty house
Much too roomy
As the family doubled and you
Shed thundering tears
Friend's sustain with solicitous strength
Settling in a habitual haze
Everything is larger when you lose someone...
But life itself
Copyright ©
THERESEWANECK
... [
2006-08-27 07:00:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Grief
(User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 08:24:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Could you have picked a better title for this awesome poem? I don't think so... This screams emotions, and despair to me. Well written!
Tom W |
|
|
Re: Grief
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 09:26:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| lovely poem, sad though. xxx |
|
|
Re: Grief
(User Rating: 1 )
by Benjina on
Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 04:43:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow that was deep. Really had me thinking and that's what I like to read. Good job. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
