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Winter
Contributed by
jockphillips
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Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A moose elk and snow on the ground there
Sun and clouds and other things
Red and other colors
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2006-08-26 15:05:18]
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Re: Winter
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:05:58 PM AEST
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| A heart stamped good to Winter poetry songs. Grey is a colour too, like when snow loses it's shade and other different words. |
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Re: Winter
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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| is this post only for lunatics or can anyone join in? interesting write, can't say that i got it, but well, maybe i'm not advanced enough... |
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Re: Winter
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by twbanter on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 06:50:02 PM AEST
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Nice Jock.
Is this haiku? I'm serrious here, not being a wise guy.
Check out "childbirth," is that haiku too?
Tom W
PS. Don't alienate your peers. It's bad business, and you may have some good stuff. And don't be defensive when you get criticism. It just may be helpfull. |
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Re: Winter
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 05:44:06 PM AEST
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This is quite simplistic. I wish you would describe more the "other" things....or is your purpose to make the "other" things come alive in my mind, and not through your words? You're interesting, Jock Phillips. (great taste in the Dead) *winks*
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Winter
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by ICEKASH on
Saturday, 7th January 2012 @ 08:04:30 AM AEST
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| i didnt get it |
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