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river of life
Contributed by
riverofwords
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
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does your life flow like a vibrant river
with different eddies and whirls ,flowing free to meet the next just around he bend
or is it slow and stagnant ending nowhere and not worrying where you end up
run your course but choose it vibrantly and rush on with what life has to offer
meet the challenge of the twists and turns ,
cast the driftwood aside and rush on to the ocean of life and beyond with excitement
and vigour of life run ree
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Re: river of life
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 04:19:27 PM AEST
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| welcome to the site, wonderful write, thank you so for sharing |
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Re: river of life
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by plous on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:43:38 PM AEST
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i think someone built a dam just for me,
i like the poem alot i will vote for it to.
oh and welcome to this site. |
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Re: river of life
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:56:43 AM AEST
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thank yuo for taking the time to comment on my poem and for the wlecome , i hpe to read many other poems etc when i get the time
peace be your journey
river |
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Re: river of life
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:58:21 AM AEST
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thank you so much for the welcoem and yuor comment ...to take the time out not oionly to read my poem but also to vote on it is very much appreciated
peace be your journey
river |
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Re: river of life
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:27:46 AM AEST
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| You paint a very vivid mental picture with your words, looking foreward to reading more. Welcome to the site |
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Re: river of life
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:19:43 AM AEST
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WElcome,I liked this peice very well said!
Glad you joined! Christina |
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Re: river of life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:55:12 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, River... Lovely poem here..great analogy of life..and a positive message... I loved the imagery!! Hoping to see much more of your work here.
Jenni |
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Re: river of life
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:29:05 AM AEST
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very lovely welcome i look forwards to reading more of your work
Sharon |
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Re: river of life
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by Arwen on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 10:30:59 AM AEST
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your words flow very well terry. I got this sort of universal image of life...and the choices we're presented with. The imagery of this flowing river was brilliant. was a lovely poem!! look forward to reading more of ur stuff.
Happiness, always. |
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Re: river of life
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 10:36:23 AM AEST
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thank yuo for yuor kind comments ..was very appreciated ...
have a geat day
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: river of life
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:10:50 AM AEST
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| again, another poem that touches my mind... excellent... great comparisions to whether you see the glass half full or half empty... |
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Re: river of life
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:54:20 AM AEST
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than you for your comments ...very much appreciated
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: river of life
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 05:29:31 AM AEST
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G'day riverofwords,
Welcome to the YPDC family. this is a wonderful poem, the beauty in your words is only matched by the beauty in your name.
Please keep writing and posting. You are a talented poet..
yours Kolbrún |
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