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Sailing Ships
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:43:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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In a moment chance and fate collide,
Leaving me unable to hide,
From your cold and icy glare,
Nothing to do but return your stare,
And see the truth emerge from your eyes,
Shrouded by anger and bittersweet lies,
I wish that the floor would swallow me whole,
Purity, innocence; it’s theft is your goal,
As once again you kiss my lips,
Drink from my soul in tiny sips,
Leaving me disgusted and longing,
Searching for some sort of belonging,
The room starts to spin in a violent haze,
I’m lost within a crazy maze,
No way out but the place I begun,
The war might be lost, but the battle is won,
Yet winning isn’t all it seems,
I’ve broke my heart and bruised my dreams,
Even sleep eludes me now,
A ship that sails with a broken bow,
A sail torn within this mist,
Those bleeding lips that I once kissed,
Place themselves upon my neck,
What once sailed becomes a wreck,
Rotting away under this sea,
No room for you, no place for me,
So walk from this dungeon and leave me to cry,
But no, please don’t say it; don’t ever say goodbye.
Copyright ©
Ruby2sdy
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2006-08-26 08:43:11]
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Re: Sailing Ships
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by twbanter on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 09:12:31 AM AEST
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Good stuff! On the crux of decision it seems, between desire and fear...
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Re: Sailing Ships
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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Holy emotion!!!
R , this was an incredible piece. I am sincerely blown
away!! God .. I don't even know where to begin. I am
at a loss as how to explain my overwheming attachment ..
I sense and feel immense passion in this and the
metaphors (my oh my!!) are outstanding!!
I loved this completely ..
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Re: Sailing Ships
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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| I dont think their strange thoughts, I could understand every word and its a fantastic write.. Well done.. xxx |
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Re: Sailing Ships
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:01:13 PM AEST
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Is this how you're feeling now 2sday? usual high standards of expression evident-just so so sad. Hope you're ok.
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