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Rainy Day
Contributed by
InfamousG
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silence, besides the soft sounds of rain upon the earth
Aesthetic, was the beauty of the woman who lay before me
Convinced, that nothing exists even close to this woman's worth
Magnetic, our hearts joined as if it was always meant to be
Slight waver, in the light as the candles flame dances around
Absolute perfection, her loveliness exceeded that of a goddess
Must savor, this moment for such a memory makes our love more profound
Unsurpassable affection, she gave even though delicate and modest
A very fine, yet tender scent of fresh cut roses fills the air
An ethereal gaze, warms my soul as I look upon her resplendent eyes
A sweet wine, hints our lips with the passionate kiss we share
I am amazed, cause at this very moment our love begins to arise
Surroundings gone, the only thing noticed is me and her together
Inseparable now, a love so strong it can never be undone
As we look upon, each other this moment seems to last forever
A silent vow, within our heart as two bodies become one
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Re: Rainy Day
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:31:42 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful :) |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:55:19 PM AEST
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| this really is beautiful - very sensual, you capture the moment perfectly. she's a very lucky lady! keep writing xxx |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by InfamousG on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 04:59:33 PM AEST
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| Thanks I'm glad you liked it!!! "G" |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by InfamousG on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 05:01:17 PM AEST
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| I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll write as long as you keep reading. "G" |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:46:06 PM AEST
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| Wow .... beautiful poem ... soooo romantic. Love this. |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by InfamousG on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:56:14 AM AEST
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| Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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