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I Stand ...
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 07:14:46 PM in AEST
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I stand …
~ strong to my convictions
I stand …
~ firm to who I am
I stand …
~ fast to all that I believe
And I stand …
~ proud to be a dad
I stand …
~ tall beside my family
I stand …
~ straight and try to lead
I stand …
~ true unto myself as well
And I stand …
~ up for those in need
But now today I stand …
~ corrected
Though …
I never thought there’d come a day
I’d not have minded in the least
For when this is taken into account
The laws of time do cease
~ Nazmythian ~
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Re: I Stand ...
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 09:42:13 PM AEST
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An incredibly strong no matter how it's explained.
It stands alone in it's own write.
huggs, smiles,
emy
U r very creative in your writing. |
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Re: I Stand ...
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 09:52:21 PM AEST
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YOu keep on standing my friend! Incredible write once again. I hope all is well with you.
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Re: I Stand ...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 09:59:16 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I especially liked the emphasis used with the bold and italics, makes the piece that much better.
Some find it hard to be so confident, and stand up for all they do believe in, but it takes an even greater person to admit when one's wrong. Never let up on what you believe in. A very expressionate piece. (Pretty sure I made a word up there lol). A pleasurable read.
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Re: I Stand ...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 07:16:21 AM AEST
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Naz, ya introduced this poem perfectly ... "I captured a moment for me." A very magnificent moment. And then you proceded to record it in your same magnificence of presentation. Awesome.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: I Stand ...
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:51:28 AM AEST
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I like this one much; its format and wording are very pointed, and you understand the concept you put forth very well. It's good to get back into YPDC poems, and especially good to find new work from one of the best! Hang in there, what?
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Re: I Stand ...
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 11:44:25 AM AEST
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Naz,
Perhaps it is when we can admit that we are not sure about where we stand on something, that we are at our very best. Also, t his feels spiritual to me as that realm would be the place where the lsws of time woeld cease.
Again, a very creative style of writing and thought provoking.
Well done my friend. You are a real inspiration
Will/Terry |
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Re: I Stand ...
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 30th July 2020 @ 06:50:31 PM AEST
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| Well done indeed |
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