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Lucifer's covenant
Contributed by
poeticginsu
on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 04:03:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Are distressed democracy, Is a mockery/
Are political persecutors display botchery/
Mutiny’s are being established, Among the masses/
Rotten flesh poured In caskets/
Citizens principals, Merges the uterus and genitals/
Minors consume subliminal chemicals/
Beauty Is depicted from physicality/
Immoral reality, Vitality, shadowed by misery/
Skeptical allegations orbit embassies/
Militaries sustain conquest, Maliciously/
Beliefs Collide, Christ against technology/
Prejudice surrounds are economy, Honestly/
False smiles and compliments when we shake hands/
Are planet Is a cesspool, A barren wasteland.
Copyright ©
poeticginsu
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2006-08-25 16:03:33]
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Re: Lucifer's covenant
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by alasdaircairns on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 04:08:15 PM AEST
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| this oozes vitality and a brutal honesty about the stae of our palnet is summed up in so few well chosen words. I like this a lot, almost has a hip hop feel to it. |
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Re: Lucifer's covenant
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:16:04 AM AEST
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this is good, like alasdair said, it's got a bit of a beat to it, rhythm and speed, i like it,
2sdyx |
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Re: Lucifer's covenant
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:04:50 PM AEST
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| This is really deep. Good job! |
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Re: Lucifer's covenant
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by Benjina on
Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 04:46:11 AM AEST
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| This is an excellent poem. Truly sums up the corrupt world of today wonderfully, with an excellent use of Vocabulary. |
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