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Judge Me
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm so wrong
Because my arm is scarred
I've waited so long
To not feel barred
I'm so numb
Because I've tried to fail
This, I never wanted to become
My life so pale.
You're so much better
Because you hide
Nothing lasts forever
So go ahead leave my side
You give me a label
Because you're scared to accept
Maybe my life isn't so stable
But my sanity I've kept.
So keep spreading lies
Inside you're dead
Like helpless little flies
With blood rushing to your head
Maybe we're not so different after all
Use me to cover your reality
In the end you'll fall
So go ahead judge me.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2006-08-25 13:11:00]
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Re: Judge Me
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by JockPhillips on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:58:40 PM AEST
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| I feel you because people have laughed at my poems before and told me it was not poetry and judged me. You have a friend in Jock Phillips here. |
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Re: Judge Me
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:09:57 PM AEST
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| Yeah, when I was younger I went trough some...stuff, and no one noticed, most labled me 'weried' You got a friend in me too. |
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Re: Judge Me
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 05:47:28 PM AEST
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Another amazing write!
Once again, I love your work!!
You put such feeling into it, I just can't get enough! |
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