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Morning Hill Scene With Music
Contributed by
JockPhillips
on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 12:02:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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The scenery has grass blades wet with mist rain
Slight fog lift on the ground there
Rain happen the night before
There is a pretty girl there
Like music she is good to sing for
A pretty scene up on the hill with other things around it
Like waking up and being glad to be for
Music and other things
The mountains in the background are so fell and so beautiful
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JockPhillips
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2006-08-25 12:02:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Morning Hill Scene With Music
(User Rating: 1 ) by True on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 11:22:26 PM AEST (User
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I may one of your only ones but I'm a fan. I'm not sure if my good opinion is just another point for derision with you, but I don't really care. It's nice to know that poetry can change like all other art forms. The funny thing is that the people who are saying that your work lacks something that it needs to be classified as art are probably also te same people who call paint splattered randomly on a canvas art. |
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