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She screams...
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She screams with a violent rage
Inside her head
Swim visions of
Mum and Pop
But they are distorted
Ugly and crude
White walls surround her being
Strangers "love" her
And five razor blades
Prick her body and soul
Until
The night of bloodshed and metal
Rescues her from this ordeal
and places her in limbo
To protect
The next victim.
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LadyDama
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2003-02-12 14:20:00]
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Re: She screams...
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so sad... |
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Re: She screams...
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by karoody on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:11:42 AM AEST
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| very strong message...thank you |
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Re: She screams...
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 04:06:56 AM AEST
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LD
The coward in me is rushing away from this terrible period in your life. It is only the you of today which keeps me following your past as I promised I would.
You write with incisive imagery I can almost feel the wounds.
LD I'm having big problems on my email connecton (Outlook Express) through my cable company NTL (another of my also HATES) so want to keep our poetry confined to YPDC and not get it mixed up with my Model Railway busuness and Family links,shopping etc.
Can we put our combined poem project on the shelf till I get myself sorted. I need my son to come over to show me how. |
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Re: She screams...
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:40:54 PM AEST
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dear poet
this shall be fine
and the sadness of my past
has been covered by time
i write to get it out
this poem wrote in 1990
TODAY i do not want to die
i wish to live to be 90 :)
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