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Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani
Contributed by
AerandirA
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Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 10:25:12 AM in AEST
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Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani
Father;
I stand out in the night
Staring at starry heavens, wondering.
Countles stars made by your hand
will there be one for me?
Father;
My heart has been broken.
In so many ways
In so may pieces
Please tell will i mend?
Father;
The storms of life are coming closer
Growing in strength and fiercenes
Will you be there?
Will you be my rock?
To seek shelter with, when the storm strikes?
Father;
My path has been clouded
No choices left in what was once my vision
Tell me; Will you guide me, show me where to go?
Father;
I speak my mind and soul
The night is quiet
The stars are all dead
The moon shines no more
You are quiet
Father, why have you forsaken me?
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Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani
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by candysears on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:13:37 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece of work...I love this peom..
But know our father will never forsake you...
God Bless!
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Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:17:51 PM AEST
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You say you are a pagan - I tell you that you are not.
I feel like crying tears at your depth of empathy with our Lord's lonliness.and feeling of total abandonment.
Blessed be the poet who can emphasize so deeply !
Very beautiful and stirring
Elizabeth
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Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:48:30 AM AEST
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This is a very powerfull loving write.
I find that God has never forsaken me but at times, I forsake him.
We're only human but he is the almighty!
luv, huggs, strength. joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani
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by Kara_Althea on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 11:22:11 AM AEST
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| I think you're still searching for something. This poem is very heartfelt. He has not abandoned you, know that, my friend. He is always with you. |
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