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Isn't That My Shirt
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:15:34 PM in AEST
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~ Nazmythian ~
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:18:47 PM AEST
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I didn't catch the error in the artwork until after posting ( Grrrrrr ) But having worked a few hours on it already ... I'm just gonna let it slide.
The first word of the last line in stanza three ... Deliberately
Nazzy ~
( just frustrated enough to let it go ) |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:36:32 PM AEST
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lol, that made me laugh. great write.
--talli |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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you really had me going for a moment..LOL. what a greaaat write. thaat's a hot pic..not what I need right now but..great with your poem.
mary |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 04:41:31 AM AEST
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Very romantic and cute.
I luv the way you have it laid out here.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by Spike on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 06:50:55 AM AEST
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Naz,
glad you've got your priorities right - a denim shirt like that will last forever. Wait till they start borrowing your undies - it's all downhill from then on.
Spike
p.s: like the construction - how do you put a poem in a picture? |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 09:50:42 AM AEST
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nazzy .. you naughty boy! lol
very flirty and very tantalizing indeed!!
(where do you find these pics?? LOLOL)
~B |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 11:23:19 PM AEST
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Comedy? That picture looks darn serious to me. This poem, this picture, both belong in a PUBLISHED book of a whole bunch of work by Nazmythian, darn it. Oh, about that "error". Yer so piiiicky ... we cowboys say delibrat'ly on purpose or, as you glide, delibrat'ly.
Absoulutely "tantalizing" write, 'n' the blonde ain't bad either!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by Willofree on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 11:18:28 AM AEST
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Naz,
Very clever, sexy and funny. It made me laugh; and the picture is perfect for this poem. You might say they are such good "friends" that she would give him the shirt off her back....
Yes, definetly a keeper!
Will/Terry |
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Re: Isn't That My Shirt
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 11:49:25 PM AEST
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| Absolutely priceless....I'm a get my shirt off kinda gal. |
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