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Mixed Messages
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 05:08:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sully me with fire
Bathe me in ice
Push me away
Attempt to entice
Brighten my nights
Darken my days
Trapped in a desert
Free in a maze
Caress my hand
Slap me in the face
Shower me in compliments
Strip me of my grace
Call me a liar
Come here for truth
Grasp towards the future
In love with your youth
Build me a world
Claim to be lame
Say it's your fault
But I get the blame
Spend not a penny
With pockets of gold
Take off your jacket
Then tell me you're cold
And I find it so hard
Though I can't seem to help it
Falling for you
When I feel so disgusted
You've shown me your heart
And then hid it away
I'm hating this game
Yet I still love to play
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2006-08-24 05:08:12]
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Re: Mixed Messages
(User Rating: 1 )
by PHISHBATES on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 06:49:16 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. Thanks. Nice flow. |
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Re: Mixed Messages
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by Aaron8124 on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 03:10:26 PM AEST
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| I like how you could keep it rhyming but yet keep the idea of the poem, i loved it |
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