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The Need and the Want
Contributed by
Franciswolf
on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:32:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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“The need and the want”
I need me a skyscraper
To compensate for my height
I need a cigarette
For something I could light
I could go for a million dollar suit
To fashion how I loot
I need
I need
I want
I want
Bold face lettering and double inch font
I need me a house up on a cliff
To give my sense of accomplishment a lift
I want a rot wilier dog with a spiked collar
To be my voice when I don’t want to holler
How much for black sunglasses, designer new and out
To block out the people who know what I’m about?
I need
I need
I want
I want
Bold face lettering and double inch font
I need me a statue made of marble stone
To be beside me when I find myself alone
Can I get some (censored) service?
So someone can tell me how it is I cure this?
Can I buy a reason to be around?
Cause forty million in and forty out I’m feeling rather bound
I need
I need
I want
I want
Bold face lettering and double inch font
Copyright ©
Franciswolf
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2006-08-23 23:32:42]
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Re: The Need and the Want
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by midnight_writer on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:14:53 AM AEST
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it's almost funny...lol but i found it good...i like it :)
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Re: The Need and the Want
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 12:29:49 PM AEST
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| This is ****ing ACE!!!!!!! I was captured by the brilliant first few lines, laughed out at the ingenuity of the chorusy bit. Truly fantastic!!!! |
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Re: The Need and the Want
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 02:28:26 PM AEST
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i love is, there's some genius hidden in those words and i can't wait to read more...fantastic.
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