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its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
Contributed by
keilantra
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Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 09:29:32 PM in AEST
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I cursed my heart
For skipping a beat
When your name flashed on the screen
I really shouldn’t…
Oh but I did.
And I hated that my pulse quickened
When your voice slid through my ears
Husky and melodramatic.
Who ever though that a word like ‘hello’
Could make me feel so warm.
And I denied that it was butterflies
That flittered through my tummy
When you spoke.
I swear that I wasn’t thinking
About your incredibly gorgeous eyes.
And it was a sigh of relief
that escaped from my lips
when you hung up.
I was not disappointed.
I was not.
Copyright ©
keilantra
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2006-08-23 21:29:32]
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:03:16 PM AEST
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Yeah, sure kei. Yeah. That's one of the finest and cutest "read between these here lines" poems that I've read in many a day. Very imaginitive ... and real ... and I'm still smiling as I close ... beautifully done!
wabl
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:11:57 PM AEST
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He he, I love this hint of mischief you allude to. It is very cute.
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by ellimac on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:23:57 PM AEST
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| haha very well put. everyone has denied their feelings in this way. |
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:00:25 PM AEST
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Nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 12:32:59 PM AEST
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| From the title, through the piece until it's sharp, tear tinged conclusion this is a sweet piece of work. me, I'm rubbish at hiding it but know that lots of folks aren't. ACE! |
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:43:52 AM AEST
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excellent piece on feigned emotion, kei! It reminded me of a song
by Simon and Garfunkel, (not the sentiment, of course, just the style).
"I Am a Rock" ...
In high school, our English teacher used it in the "poetry portion" of our
curriculum. I was surprised to see how many did not get the pretense
of emotion in it.
This was clever and completely relatable.
Enjoyable read, as are all of your writes.
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Re: its.not.spring. and love isn't in the air.
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 03:42:04 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to this poem as I have friends going through this same stage. Very nicely done, and I don't think I could have done better. |
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