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Blessed Union of the Elements
Contributed by
spike
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Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 07:24:15 PM in AEST
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YOU
Tell me where my soul is, and
I’ll ask you where is yours
And you say that their a-roaming
On distant, sun kissed shores
ME
Whisper me sweet nothings, and
I’ll sing you songs of joy
How in all the world’s great turmoils
A girl still loves a boy
US
Ask me how my heart beats, and
I will tell you to the tune
Of breathless nights of passion
Beneath a harvest moon
ONE
Wonder what I’m dreaming
And my secrets will be yours
Shared in lovers’ union
On those distant, sun drenched shores
Copyright ©
spike
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2006-08-23 19:24:15]
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by midnight_writer on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 08:58:15 PM AEST
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beautiful...love is ever-so beautiful.
wonderful poem..
midnight~amaya |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:02:24 PM AEST
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May you be blessed in this thing, my fellow aussie (and pantheist.) I can't comment much-only you truly can appreciate the scale of intensity that you feel, but at least I can appreciate where you are coming from, especially as of late. Thanks for posting,
larkspur |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:22:01 PM AEST
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Now I know why I said I'd be in love with you if you weren't so ugly and the wrong gender! I actually love your work, ya wrinkled up old soul! SUPERB!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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Speechless,
this melted me into my chair! So very beautiful.
Michelle |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 01:18:40 AM AEST
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I really loved this. It is so breathtaking and romantic, I really loved these words:
Ask me how my heart beats, and
I will tell you to the tune
Of breathless nights of passion
Beneath a harvest moon
It reminds me of times gone by, with my husband. Thank you for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:14:37 PM AEST
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This was a breathtaking write. Beautiful. Quite the romantic aren't you? *smiles*
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 07:45:56 PM AEST
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Know what I wish for you, Spike? I hope... that no matter how many wonderful pieces you post in this category and no matter how many YPDCers pop by to say it's beautiful and romantic and breathtaking and lovely...
that you, for having discovered something so utterly blissful, find yourself looking down at the page and feeling as though you only caught part of the everything it is.
*nods* Yep... that's what I wish. For you. For me. For all of us.
[Oh and, Spike? This is beautiful and romantic and breathtaking and lovely. *wink*]
Knowing the possibility of that,
~Snemmy |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 09:03:28 AM AEST
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hmmmm .. something seems to be brewing in the land of kangaroos ...
S~ this touched me in ways I am hardly able to express .. almost like
a dream. It feels so painfully ethereal and yet beautifully real as well ..
I have been in both places .. the throws of passion and wishing
to be. AND, I have written romantic poetry in both instances .. I don't
know which is more taxing- trying to capture feelings you can only
remember or penning the emotions in the very instant that
you feel them .. somehow, I feel, we can never truly capture
all the wonder and beauty of love. Somethings just
cannot be explained, you know?
Still .. this was exceptional. I love the breaks between the stanzas.
And the imagery, well .. it's just exquisite, spike, my friend.
gorgeous
~Breezy
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by Sasha on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 02:24:10 AM AEST
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| I absolutely love this poem! and 'ditto' to what everyone has said about this poem too!! |
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Re: Blessed Union of the Elements
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by Merry on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 05:53:17 AM AEST
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Spike
This is a hottie - very romantic and a bit steamy....I like it. I like the way you titled each verse as it makes it seem like scenes in a play or chapters in a book giving different perspectives, nicely done.
:) Merry |
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