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Deleted poems without the content and racism so to speak

Contributed by Metikulus on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 06:15:05 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

i got the mind of a menice
The skills of a chemist
The penmanship of a dentist
With the surgical features imbeded
The speed of a lightning bolt when it strikes to diminish
Devouring his prey like a Falcon at its fittest
Wont let the David throw a rock at his Golith complextion
Its a misconception, like George Bush winning his election
If i was sent off on iraq to do a mission
My well scripted invision would be to change the style of livin
To put my Family over there in a better position
Where grindins allowed without any suspicion
A land free of taxes and gas prices without government intervention
**** them, We doin it on our own, need I not mention
Thier plans to defeat us are similar to a henchman
Just be careful who you hire when thier strapped with the wire
To infiltrate my camp and put out our explosive bond fire
Investigations will pop off cuz somebody got fired

Leavin you ratters in tatters dont phase me a bit
You better off running your mouth bout how my gun spit
I advise you ta lay low or be out
Or you'll get hit upside the head with two 4-5's that shout
Leavin every ear on your block to ring
It'll be the remix to you r song that i sing
Hotter that hot oh damn you got burned
Maybe next time you'll think twice, it'll be a leasson learned
When you come to find me, when you come to see me
I'll put more scratches on you then a skippin cd
I'll leave you dead on the tracks like a train outta service
My word play got you **** ya pants, dog you nervous

Copyright © Metikulus ... [ 2006-08-23 18:15:05]
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Re: Deleted poems without the content and racism so to speak (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 03:00:28 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this a lot.
Especially that last line lol

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