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Untamable
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 03:02:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Untamable
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There’s a little part inside my mind,
That wants to know, seeks to find.
The missing piece, the hidden view,
The magical part I see in you.
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There’s a little piece inside my heart,
That needs to progress, wants to start.
Finding your weakness, while gaining strength,
Breaking down your defensive fence.
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There’s a little wish inside my brain,
A wildness of you, I’d love to tame.
Your stubborn mind, your wondering eye,
The part about you that makes me sigh.
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There’s a little mysterious side of you,
That pulls me in, holds me true.
An untamable fire, an uncaptured spirit,
It’s like I’m the rabbit and you’re the carrot.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2006-08-23 15:02:37]
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Re: Untamable
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 03:36:20 PM AEST
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| Oh dear when I read that I thought you were writing about me. ha ha This is an amazing read, I enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: Untamable
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 06:09:55 PM AEST
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A brilliant write....
God Bless!
C.S
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Re: Untamable
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by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 06:07:26 PM AEST
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that last line is inspired!!! thoroughly enjoyed this read, very nice,
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