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Life is a house
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:21:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a house
The truth escapes
from cracks in the foundation,
like a fault line,
but whose fault was it.
Pressure causes cracks;
stress as well,
life and light sucked
out from new formed fissures.
We could conceal the break,
behind fake walls,
ornamental walls,
walls painted with smiley faces
and crack becomes a crevice
suddenly sucking in all in involved,
entrapped,
kicking and screaming
under life’s rubble until
no fight is left.
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2006-08-23 12:21:25]
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Re: Life is a house
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 03:31:35 PM AEST
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| This is full of the negative side of life, I am a very positive person,but I see where you are coming from. Enjoyed reading it very much. Sue x |
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Re: Life is a house
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 12:31:13 PM AEST
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This is a very truthful poem... I liked how you chose the words that you did... It was well written...
Take care
christina |
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