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Dirty Little Secret
Contributed by
JockPhillips
on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 09:32:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dirty little secret trying
But being bad at it
Not good
And trying to keep up the good but failing
Not original trite pedestrian
Just bad which is not good
Because in other places where dirty little secret is not
People are keeping up the doing of the good
A field somewhere has a girl with ribbons and bows in her hair
Running through the wet grass with dew drops on the field there
Good things are happening and the sun is shining
Copyright ©
JockPhillips
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2006-08-23 09:32:11]
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:29:28 PM AEST
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| very imaginative. dont quit get where the dirty little secret comes in, but good write. |
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Re: Dirty Little Secret
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 08:52:33 PM AEST
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| how can you say it's not the best poem??? o..m...g...it's absolutely brilliant. i didn't think such talent even existed on this site! i thought you could only find things like this in groups for the mentally challenged! how could i have been so wrong.. |
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