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The House of Doubt...
Contributed by
markymark
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Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 09:37:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I once lived in a house of doubt
but the optimist in me... said i should get out
so moved instead to a house of pain
that wrecked my head... and hurt my brain
found myself in a house of sin
felt at home when i first walked in
didnt stay to long... i got kicked out
so travelled back to the house of doubt...
Left again for the house of sloth
"to busy for me"... so i just walked out
found consolation in the house of glee
but my happyness upped...and walked out on me
seen the inside of the house of fear
with trepidation i knew...that i cant stay here
so booked a bed in the house of greed
where i lost everything that i'd ever need
so i turned the room...inside out
arriving back at the house of doubt...
So i left to go... to the house of rules
but left as quick...when i met the fools
popped next door... to the house of hate
but i wouldnt mix... so i had to vacate
then i knew that every... place i tried
i'm more at peace to my house inside...
by MDM...29/08/01...
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2002-07-28 09:37:22]
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Re: The House of Doubt...
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 08:02:32 PM AEST
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I don't often say Wow...but wow, wow, wow!!
This has to be one of your best...hope you're proud of it. It flowed so well and...what can I say Mark ..stuck for words.
Love Chrissie xx |
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Re: The House of Doubt...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:37:52 PM AEST
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Hey Mark!! I have to agree with Chrissie..
Excellent work....This is now my favourite of your poems!!!
Jenni |
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