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Is there a trick to making you smile?
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:00:43 AM in AEST
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FriendshipPoetry
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Is there a trick to making you smile?
Is it in the angels, dancing backwards in the rain,
Following the moonlight come to greet the world again;
Or is it in the wild, tired grass,
That dreams of growing free,
That dreams itself another self beside a golden sea,
Or is it yet still,
In the shadow of a smile
That’s been away a while,
Waiting for the rain
To wash away your pain;
Waiting for the sea
To set your smile free?
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iodinelove
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2006-08-23 02:00:43]
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Re: Is there a trick to making you smile?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:30:43 AM AEST
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i loved it :)
- bethani - |
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Re: Is there a trick to making you smile?
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by Keilantra on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:07:26 PM AEST
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you're right. its different from what you usually write. really. but regardless, as it is with all your other poems, i loved this one, you really have something in your writing, a quality, that just draws me into the poems.
xXx
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