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Demons of my conscience
Contributed by
perfectly_flawed
on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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In your eyes I see the rain
I have caused to bleed out,
On those dark days
where nothing shines.
In the blue of the moon.
Rises a lingering hope of change,
Which in the mist I never seem to catch
But I see.
By dawn I'm awake
the thoughts of your dispair haunt me,
but the true demons
are the ones from the pit of my conscience.
Still dazed I see,
I see what I can never
seem to catch.
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Re: Demons of my conscience
(User Rating: 1 )
by trini on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 09:48:19 PM AEST
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i liked this but it left me longing for more.
i know the feeling so no real description is needed
but you got me to comment so. good work
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Re: Demons of my conscience
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 10:06:34 PM AEST
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| hauntingly done |
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