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The Torture Chambers
Contributed by
lancaster
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Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 02:46:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I remain unimpressed
As your words begin to digest
The very interior of chest
My thoughts of love
On to you I must confess
The true fight which is fought
Counteracting my loneliness
Balanced scales weigh wishes
Knives and forks compliment expensive dishes
Surreptitious with secret ingredients
No additives or preservatives
Fresh from the market
Come the provisions
The vegetables, fruits, and herbs
Combine for a delicious
Salad of mixed greens and conditions
Making enemies
When friends are needed
When battles are defeated
And demons have receded
Into the backdrop of all previous
All have seen these
Displays of achievement
A matter of convenience
In the lap of luxury
Sits nothing necessary
All becomes extraordinary
To repeat, out of the ordinary
Upbeat, in moments of glory
Only to fall from eighty-six stories
Into the arms of something holy
__________
________
Copyright ©
lancaster
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2006-08-22 14:46:40]
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Re: The Torture Chambers
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by Nirvana12 on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 04:04:35 PM AEST
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Awesome poem
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Re: The Torture Chambers
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:19:50 PM AEST
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| Interesting. |
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Re: The Torture Chambers
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:42:16 PM AEST
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If this ain't a definition of gripping and captivating and darned enjoyable, I got the wrong dictionary. Really enjoyed this line by line "torture chamber". 'Cept the meal; maybe the condemned's last! Good work.
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Re: The Torture Chambers
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 10:19:10 PM AEST
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Excellent flow
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