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Life and love
Contributed by
silent
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Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 03:38:47 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Hatred and love one of the same
Fear and anger our eternal game
Most content just to exist
Suicide just another on the list
Think about your life
Do you want more, to not just drift?
Everyone around, not making a sound
Too afraid to move, consequences of breaking the groove
We have constructed a beautiful lonely world
Where we just escape into our minds
Some other place no-one could ever find
It’s so very sad to live on this earth
Overall this is it and always will be.
Copyright ©
silent
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2006-08-22 03:38:47]
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Re: Life and love
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 03:42:01 AM AEST
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when i just read the title, life and love, i thought, do not mix. but i liked the poem, especially the last two lines.
It's so ver sad to live on this earth,
Overall this is it and always will be.
simply because it's so true.
--talli |
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Re: Life and love
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by yackerz85 on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 05:18:02 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Sad but true. |
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Re: Life and love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:11:57 AM AEST
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Good work here.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Life and love
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by deadclown on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 03:48:29 AM AEST
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| simple poem and I like that. Simple and straight to the point. I agree, while we're here we may as well make the most of it |
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