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Broken and Shattered
Contributed by
packatack
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Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 02:30:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I tried to be strong and tried to be tough
With all things that this world has to offer
I woke up hard and woke up late
How the heck can I get back on my feet
Things in real life I never seen or remember
Like lil kids playing seesaw next to the playground
I'm gettin old and tired can feel it in my bones
Maybe I'm jes another bum walking around the corner
Everything seems shattered and might not get fixed
But I don't know how I'm gonna get back to my feet
Too broken to fix and glue never holds long
Ages in life like mine are never gonna be told
A nobody in this world why did I survive
Everyone else's life seems more important than mine
I don't have a family either no son to smile on
Maybe someday this pain will go away
But right now its seems that my life will go away
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Re: Broken and Shattered
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 02:36:31 AM AEST
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it's hell of a lot easier for someone's life to dissapear than their pain. but i suppose most want the smart way out, not the easy one....good write, and i hope it works out for ya. in the mean time...live. not like we have any choice.
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Re: Broken and Shattered
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 05:08:04 AM AEST
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So sad but your not alone, every one gets bad times they can get better, you have to try and think positive.. Its true when you think positive life does get better, there are people who really care to not just family.. Hope things change and you find happiness.. xxx
I read this and its true.
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it, |
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Re: Broken and Shattered
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by brew on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:08:01 AM AEST
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Try looking down a path, of something new. Its there, maybe just not right in front, yet its there.! We all go through differ times.......many with hope, and faith, and then some with out. Im sorry pain is with thee...hope it finds away back to bring you joy, and happiness. We all need that in our life. Strong, sad write......thanks for sharing, and know......ppl at ypdc, are around the corner for ya.
Brew~ |
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Re: Broken and Shattered
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by LifeFadingAway on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:20:32 PM AEST
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| Life sometimes seems hard, and you sometimes are lonely. But you have to enjoy the little moments you love. Not everything in life is bad |
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Re: Broken and Shattered
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by Munchkin on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 04:29:25 PM AEST
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| i feel your pain. life seems pretty down and horrible right now, but it's can only get better. no amount of "glue" is gonna fix the pain and sadness of life, but someone else's love can make the world so much better. you just need to find someone that can make you smile while you've got tears in your eyes. |
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Re: Broken and Shattered
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by ever1der on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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It's easy to be brave and offer advice as I sit here. I think I'll
just comment on the poem. Good..sad..heartfelt. keep up the hard work. |
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