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Flowers
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:53:35 PM in AEST
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From out a golden step among green velvet stems
and silk chords, are crystal disks
that turn black as night in the sun.
I feel the digitalis and can see the openings
down the carpet of silver filigree like eyes and hair.
Yellow-gold pieces strewn over mahogany and oak
their columns supporting emerald domes
a canopy all about the bouquets of white satin
and delicate sprays of ruby-delight
surrounding cardinal roses
Like God with huge blue eyes and limbs like clouds
the sea and sky lure to our souls the many flowers
young and strong.
Billy
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Re: Flowers
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:58:43 PM AEST
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OMFG Billy, This was an amazing write. Makes one wish they were that mesmerizing flower. Absolutely breathtaking. Simply a pleasure to read. Geez, I love my Mother Earth and all her unique treasures. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Flowers
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:03:46 AM AEST
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This is Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful write Billy.
Like God with huge blue eyes and limbs like clouds
the sea and sky lure to our souls the many flowers
young and strong
amazing
hugs |
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Re: Flowers
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by bakacaka on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:29:25 AM AEST
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A very strong nature write
would go wonderfully with a picture
but thats just me |
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Re: Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:00:45 AM AEST
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| I'll bet if ya go back and talk to those flowers, recite this to 'em, they blush a little and thank you for the compliment of your magnificent words. Wonderful. |
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Re: Flowers
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 02:31:41 AM AEST
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| This is truly beautiful. A masterpiece . You have a wonderful descriptive way with words. I applaud you. Thanks for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: Flowers
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 03:11:55 AM AEST
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| I agree its breath taking beautiful. xxx |
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Re: Flowers
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by brew on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:11:00 AM AEST
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Such a sturn and well thought write, for something that takes away the breath and puts a smile upon thee face. Such beauty in the words. So mesmerising....
Thanks
Brew~ |
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Re: Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 06:12:54 PM AEST
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Sweet poet .. this piece is so soft and gentle .. it feels
like the sensation of lying in a field of yellow, drenched in
sunlight, whilst shadowed by an occasional fluffy white
cloud. Beautiful imagery sweets.
This could be so profound in a mysterious and sort of
metaphorical way .. like many of the words you engrave
on the page.
absolutely stunning
~Breezy
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Re: Flowers
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by ever1der on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:07:47 PM AEST
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nothing more can be said. I agree with all of the above.
mary |
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