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Friend or Enemy
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 03:50:51 PM in AEST
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Friendship is give and take,
Even when you make a mistake,
To err is human, to forgive divine,
But it edges on a very fine line,
You were someone I thought I knew,
But selfishness I found in you,
Of others feelings you don't care,
When the pain they feel is hard to bear,
You goad them with a selfish ardour,
And when they crack, you hit them harder,
Is supremacy really your hidden goal,
When the misery you give, takes its toll,
Well I myself would rather give than take,
No hateful mishaps will I make,
I promise to be a friend, and so just,
And I can never break that trust,
So friendship is give and take,
Be careful you don't make a mistake,
For once that trust has been broken,
My door will stay shut, never again to open,
So treat your friends with love, and care,
For you would miss them, if they weren't there,
Trust is something that you didn't give me,
Are you my friend or now my enemy.
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jerseysue
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Re: Friend or Enemy
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by wrdz on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:08:42 PM AEST
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| Justified feelings. Nice job of writing. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Friend or Enemy
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:24:19 PM AEST
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Such a true write.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Friend or Enemy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:38:20 AM AEST
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A bit abstract? I could find not one bit of abstraction to this poem of observation, honesty, resolve and suggestion right to the end question without a question mark. Freudian ommision? This sucker is good and brutally assertive (with justification), my brit buddy.
wabl
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Re: Friend or Enemy
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 05:12:48 AM AEST
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| Brilliant Sue, hope whoever it is understands how there actions hurt. xxx |
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