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Buried
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:56:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I found my heart buried in your backyard
with an orange tiger lily on its grave.
It's deafening thud and constant pulsing
Drove me to an insane position.
I heard it in my mind , moving fast yet slow
scraping against the walls of my sanity
eroding my self control.
So I walked this shallow path
as the thud grew louder and louder
My hands against my ears...did nothing to stop the vibrant noise
I found my heart buried in your backyard
So I wrapped it in my shirt,
and hugged it to my chest...
Deaf to the screams of my soul.
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Inevitable
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2006-08-21 10:56:32]
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Re: Buried
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 03:39:04 AM AEST
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| absolutely brilliant..... |
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Re: Buried
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by LifeFadingAway on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:06:08 PM AEST
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I love it..
great poem |
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Re: Buried
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 01:59:54 AM AEST
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I read this a couple times. I have to say, I was quite in to it. Great write. Good metaphors. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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