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POISON WHISPER
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 08:34:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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look at yourself
you poor mis-guided fool
see what you have become
an evil spiteful tool
its not your words that have broken me
the words that torn my heart
are their not so gentle whispering
that broke this family apart
so when you shout abuse at me
just stop and think of them
because its they who have spoiled any chance
of being near me again
so happy in you victory
raise your arms aloft
but hollow is that happy sound
cos its my love that you lost
you listen to the devil
and all that comes with that
you thought that i would stick around
and be treated like a doormat
but where are your friends now?
when the words are said and done?
you sit there all alone
and my new life has begun
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2006-08-21 08:34:11]
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Re: POISON WHISPER
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by Inevitable on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 11:01:14 AM AEST
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| Tells a good story. |
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Re: POISON WHISPER
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 02:17:18 PM AEST
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| This is good , It does tell a story. and I can relate to some of this. Well written, you have done a good job. Thank you for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: POISON WHISPER
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:43:45 PM AEST
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| I relate to this all too well...good job, great poem. |
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