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To late
Contributed by
mellymell
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 05:23:27 AM in AEST
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Your slipping out of my grasp, hold on tight I am going to help you out of this. Take that knife out of your hand and pass it to me. You'll be safe if you just listen to me and do what i tell you to do! Take a breath, its all going to be fine... did'nt I tell you, that you are going to be fine? I am pulling you out of the water... putting a life jacket on you, didnt anyone tell you that I need you? I have to save you before it is to late, watching you is a 24/7 job. I cant sleep I am always thinking of you and what you might do next and it scares me all I want is you to be happy and safe. O did I forget to mention that I waited to long to say this or to help you, and that you are already dead? Well if so I am sorry and I hope you will forgive me!!
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Re: To late
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by Inevitable on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 11:13:59 AM AEST
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| This is very sad but written in a nice style. I've never lost anyone in that sense but I don't know what I'd do if I did. |
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Re: To late
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 11:52:14 AM AEST
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This is heartbreaking. Yes I do know first hand. One part of the sadness comes in guilt. Hun there was nothing more that you could have done that what you did already. So please know in your heart this was as it was and as painful as it is not your fault. I wont tell you that time will heal this type of loss because it doesnt. There will always be a mark left deep inside your heart but you will go on, the ones left behind have no choice .
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