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where is my sun?
Contributed by
angelness
on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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my tears are ice
my heart now cold
my pain turned to anger
a world unknown
these feelings i can't control
my soul is frozen
my words untold
a love that was broken
my dreams on hold
the evil around me
i feel so cold
my days are dark
the nights are long
my sun went away
Waiting for a brighter day
Copyright ©
angelness
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2003-02-12 06:00:00]
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Re: where is my sun?
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by InfamousG on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:45:28 AM AEST
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| I've been there, you'll find your sun. Your poetry is nicely written, I like it. "G" |
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Re: where is my sun?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 10:20:30 AM AEST
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been there did that know this feeling all to well ,this is good,
~ Heaven Angel~ |
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Re: where is my sun?
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:14:30 AM AEST
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This is very well written it struck me deeply
my days are dark
the nights are long
i feel the same way u can get through it I know it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: where is my sun?
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by RealCrystal on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:01:09 PM AEST
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THis is a great poems, it seems as though you have expressed my innermost feelings.
R.C. |
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Re: where is my sun?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 05:39:16 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, Angelness..tho so sad..
Jenni |
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Re: where is my sun?
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:53:20 PM AEST
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| i have to sign when i read a poem like this and all others including mine own... poets must have these feelings to be able to write to something to urge them to bring feelings to papers and so i say to you , you may hate this feelin now , but will miss it dearly when you want to write something meaninful and are parted with this feelin ... but don't worry being happy helps write too =) |
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