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Washing Away The Pain!
Contributed by
LeeLee
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 03:48:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wind in my hair
Sand at my feet
Sun on my skin
These feelings within.
Salt on my lips
Glare in my eyes
Bruise on my knee
Here’s where you left me.
Such is life
Life is a beach
Memories to last
My heart's fading fast.
Shells all around
Gulls swoop down
People laugh and play
You made me this way.
Smells of the sea
Burn of the heat
The feeling of free
I have broken your hold on me.
Waves crashing down
The shore is so sweet
Here I’ll always stay
The pain has washed away.
By Jess Hamilton
Copyright ©
LeeLee
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2006-08-21 03:48:01]
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Re: Washing Away The Pain!
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 08:37:50 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this walking on the beach really helps when you feel sad.. Lovely poem xxx |
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Re: Washing Away The Pain!
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by from_first_to_last on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:18:56 AM AEST
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amazing poem. i can really relate. the beach is a wonderful place to let go of all your pain and start over new.
Luv,Skittles |
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Re: Washing Away The Pain!
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by spanky on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 09:42:40 AM AEST
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An excellent poem for those who feel they will never get over their loss-whatever that loss is.
Time really does heal all scars. You can survive the worst setbacks & rise to the surface again all new and shiny. |
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