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Cinderalla
Contributed by
Kenesha4
on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 12:22:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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He says my eyes are beautiful
his voice makes me feel blissful
young hearts are beating in heat of the sun
i am no longer nervous i do not want to run
melted ice cream and a beautiful day dream
leads me to realize things are just what they
seem
walking down tracks of the past
makes me feel this thing could last
i slowly walk through the water so cold
as our eyes touch not a word need be told
floating near the waterfall
this is my grand ball
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Kenesha4
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2006-08-21 00:22:35]
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Re: Cinderalla
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 08:45:32 AM AEST
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| SO LOVELY, BRILLIANT POEM. XXX |
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Re: Cinderalla
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by 3660Days on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 07:06:40 PM AEST
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| I am not much for ABAB rhyming, it sounds too sing-songy to me. I love the "concept" though. |
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