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Someone Should Say Something

Contributed by Mangos on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 06:57:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I am the king
of solitary nothing

I take myself very seriously
within no boundaries
lines of symmetry
form around the periphery
and I become informed
as the service is only first being performed

Someone set the alarm
in the lobby
anyone is liable to perpetrate severe harm
or inflict deep wounds
predict three moons
over the sun

I have overdone
what cant be undone
outshone the decision
and all the while having loads of fun
loads on some
stop and come
find religion
hold me tight
then let me run
let me bite
and pierce the skin
fierce is in
fire and gin
satire to win
the hearts of a million
seeds sprawled
keys open vaults
to fortunes

Almost as tall
as two heads on a stick
two nails used to prick
fur coats and cherry lips lick
fairly optimistic
comparatively sadistic
with a mind twisted
into twine
red and pink wine
shredded from logistics
embedded in techniques
taught through speech
electrified and within reach
suckers wore the leach
naked and crying

Some monster controls me
it is reality
and nothing can change that
nothing touches it
and anything that comes close
surely ends up shaken and distraught

____________
________

Copyright © Mangos ... [ 2006-08-20 18:57:10]
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Re: Someone Should Say Something (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 03:21:49 AM AEST
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Really great poem, really enjoyed reading it, You have a wonderful way with words. xxxx

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